I am like a wolf on a treacherous walk
through a shady forest that never seems to end. I never know what I might find
in this forest because there is a surprise behind every towering eerie tree. I have
run into bears that have maimed me to a point where I had to crawl until my
wounds healed into scars and my strength returned, but as I crawled the entire time,
the progress of my healing was slowed because it ripped open the scars and took
a lot of strength to go on. I have come across mocking ravens that pick at my wounds
and squawk horrible songs at me. Every time I tried to yell back at the raven,
all it did was squawk louder and grow crueler in its songs. I have also come
upon packs of wolves that snap and snarl, simulating behavior that made me feel
unwelcome. Every time I got near any of these packs, even submissively, they
would bite at me and then turn immediately away and ignore me until I tried to
submissively join their group again. But, I have run into other wolves that have
had a life journey similar to my own. They are just as cautious as I am though because
they are a lone wolf like myself and have been attacked and mocked as well.
Once we cautiously inspect one another and slowly get to know each other, we
become loyal to each other as wolves should be. It makes me a stronger wolf,
having others by my side, knowing that they care for me. I slowly built up my pack, but sometimes members of
the pack find other packs to join. I howl at the Great Moon in the Sky in sorrow
for the ones I have lost, for the help that I need, but I always try to
remember to howl in happiness for the ones that I have met and that have
stayed. I will continue my walk through the shady forest, howling at the Great
Moon in the Sky daily, running into good and bad surprises everywhere.
Bryce Ditmore, I would like you to know that you have made me cry.
ReplyDeleteI have been reading other peoples analogy's and commenting and have been very close to tears because I am an emotional person, and then I get to yours, knowing it was going to be great, and end up crying. Thankyou Bryce, thank you very much.
Bryce, this is an amazing analogy and I feel that it truly shows the type of person you are. Like, if we put all the analogies in a hat and picked them out, I would be able to tell that this was yours, not by the fact that I know some of the stuff that you've gone through, but just by the effects and scenery and the way you present things. It is beautiful.
I hope that I am a person within this pack, and i feel that I am, but for the slight chance that I am not a part of this pack mentioned, then I am an omega outside of the the pack following and learning from you and the others. I love you Bryce, and this was amazing. (:
Man. When you all write from your heart, it packs a punch. Love the YOU that's in this Bryce. Leyla's right-- it's very much your voice. The imagery is poignant, and heart-breaking, and at the end it makes me want to cheer. Thanks for sharing this. Wonderful writing and all the conventions are solid.
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Bryce this post is awesome. I can totally picture you as a wolf in the woods. Not sure why that imagery fits so well with your personality, but it just does. Anyways, I really enjoyed the story that you told, starting with some loner wolf who gets attacked and ostracized and eventually finding some others who share his (or her) pain. It was refreshing to read this story and it really helps motivate me with my own struggles. The whole post is wonderful and you ought to keep up the good work Bryce. This was great.
ReplyDeleteOh Bryce, my wonderful friend. You are one of the strongest people I know. No matter how many difficulties you face, you always, ALWAYS get back up and keep going. Your analogy was beautiful and heartfelt. Anyone who reads this could see the absolute truth behind the words. I believe that I am one of those wolves who is beside you, and I would like to stay there forever. Love you buddy :)
ReplyDeleteP.S. You made me cry too, dangit...
this made me sad...in a good way. i loved the analogy of you being a wolf in the woods alone. i could totally picture it and it was really touching.
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